The music in the opening grabbed my attention. Unfortunately, your voice seemed muffled and not easily heard. As a result, it was easy for me to tune out here and there. The information flowed very well and made sense.
Your video was a nice demonstration. You made sure you addressed key points along the way. I agree with Stacey that sometimes your voice was a bit muffled. Overall you were orderly in your presentation and delivered it well.
George, Your video was very detailed. The application of detailing the car was organized and demonstrated with ideas and skills. At times, your voice was hard to understand. Good Job!
I liked the video for the most part. You explained things a bit fast and the videographer visibly had trouble keeping up with you. Next time I would present the materials longer.
I thought your video was very organized I like how you had all the equipment set up, I also like how you talked about safety issues, I thought you could have been a little louder it was a little hard to hear you. Nice job.
Job well done! I learned how to do car detailing now, but I guess I am not clear on why the beginners have to use the tape. The steps are clear, but I guess if you list keywords on each step for learners to be cautious when doing certain steps, it would work better for the students. I also wasn't sure if the detailing includes waxing because the video seems to end abruptly. Dr. Hsu
I couldnt hear you as well as i would have liked, but i am always intersted in car work because i am so awful at it myself. Through this video your students will do a much better job than me in their attempts
I like the video alot. I learned a fair amount from it. Whether it was my computer, your video camera, or the sound quality int he room it was hard to haer what you were saying. Although watching what you were doing made it a bit easier to understand what you were saying.
Interesting video topic. If you get a chance, check out Zaino car polish. So easy to use and such great results heheh.
I think it might have been better if you had your helper stand closer with the camera so your voice could be picked up better, and then they could pull out for overall shots when needed. Also, with the camera closer, I think we might have picked up on some of the finer points of how to use proper technique when working on the car.
I like the fact you are showing off and explaining the materials you are about to use. The introducing slides are very useful because they explain what you are about to do. The speed was good and the flow from one step to another was good. I have a minor and a major suggestion which might improve on a very good movie; the minor: you voice seemed muffled. Major: use my car next time!
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16 comments:
The music in the opening grabbed my attention. Unfortunately, your voice seemed muffled and not easily heard. As a result, it was easy for me to tune out here and there. The information flowed very well and made sense.
George,
Your video was a nice demonstration. You made sure you addressed key points along the way. I agree with Stacey that sometimes your voice was a bit muffled. Overall you were orderly in your presentation and delivered it well.
George, Your video was very detailed. The application of detailing the car was organized and demonstrated with ideas and skills. At times, your voice was hard to understand. Good Job!
I liked the video for the most part. You explained things a bit fast and the videographer visibly had trouble keeping up with you. Next time I would present the materials longer.
I would have to agree on the voice being muffled a bit. But overall you were organized and the video was interesting. Good Work
I thought your video was very organized I like how you had all the equipment set up, I also like how you talked about safety issues, I thought you could have been a little louder it was a little hard to hear you. Nice job.
I thought your video was very organized I like how you had all the equipment set up, I also like how you talked about safety issues. Nice job.
I enjoyed that video the music in the beginning was classic. The demonstration was imformative and clear.
Hi Greg,
Job well done! I learned how to do car detailing now, but I guess I am not clear on why the beginners have to use the tape. The steps are clear, but I guess if you list keywords on each step for learners to be cautious when doing certain steps, it would work better for the students. I also wasn't sure if the detailing includes waxing because the video seems to end abruptly. Dr. Hsu
I couldnt hear you as well as i would have liked, but i am always intersted in car work because i am so awful at it myself. Through this video your students will do a much better job than me in their attempts
George,
It was hard to hear your voice at times but the video was done very well. The information was put together well.
George,
I like the video alot. I learned a fair amount from it. Whether it was my computer, your video camera, or the sound quality int he room it was hard to haer what you were saying. Although watching what you were doing made it a bit easier to understand what you were saying.
Interesting video topic. If you get a chance, check out Zaino car polish. So easy to use and such great results heheh.
I think it might have been better if you had your helper stand closer with the camera so your voice could be picked up better, and then they could pull out for overall shots when needed. Also, with the camera closer, I think we might have picked up on some of the finer points of how to use proper technique when working on the car.
I like the fact you are showing off and explaining the materials you are about to use. The introducing slides are very useful because they explain what you are about to do. The speed was good and the flow from one step to another was good. I have a minor and a major suggestion which might improve on a very good movie; the minor: you voice seemed muffled. Major: use my car next time!
Good job overall. The only thing was the sound. But unless we are useing proffesional cameras these little things are bound to happen. well done
I Liked the before and after tape mark. You could see the results better this way than if you did the whole hood.
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